Is this a good poem? 10.?
It is difficult to describe a body without using the old cliché "hard rock" and "cold like ice, "not only hard and cold to the touch, but a hardness and coldness of the air that sends chills your body. The hands seem to be normal that the sleeve is rolled up to reveal Cinderella, not the color of the doll to the difference between false rosy lifeless hands. Even smile freezes into a dark expression that reminds me of a cross between a secret smile of the Mona Lisa's smile and heard the Buddha The scent of colorful flowers in the awkward body can not hide death smell odor comprising the whole piece is very hard, cold reality sucks. I am in ninth grade. Any improvement? Y If you want answer, what literary devices can you see?
oxymoron odorless smell. Otherwise, literary devices are common enough that you do not check Part other than prose. (Covering the whole room can be exaggerated, or may be theoretical omnipresent narrator – both are natural technical prose). I according another poster that "sucks" away too close to the demotic, and smells bad "would be less in my face. However, as a piece of poetry prose, which has great potential.
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